Short Stories

Hannah_. · Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 10:48 pm Post subject: Short Stories

Okay, so, if we don't want the site to 'die' then we need some new stuff.
So, i was thinking, send in any short stories you've wrote and we'll rate them out of 10. Realistically. And give you feedback.
And, maybe we should have a leaderboard to monitor progress?
So, go ahead and start sending or writing.

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x.princess.x · Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 6:23 pm Post subject:

okay i will send mine its kinda long peepals its called the gardian
Sleeping sliently, my love over comes me of this tiny child Yvonne i am her gardian Neros i love her and have to take care of her for this hateful city wold never survive on her own she realies on me i am her friend to others i am imaginary but i am real allright real and free to destroy whatever tries to harms her. Icome from a infitnate city is the clouds its very important that i travel up there to check on my sister with her 3 daughters i am scared for her even the infinate city isn't entirly safe same as this one . i want to look after both at once i so do. "i could help" wisbered a strange voice from behind me "WHOOSE THERE!" i yelled turning round " why its only me Neros your friend Lydia" said the figure infront of me i looked at her closley in the dim lights of yvonnes room. It was my witch friend Lydia with long black hair down to her waist and big dark eyes she is the prettist witch ever known in the history books she wins contest after contest with her beauty. " its been a long time Lydia" I said looking into her eyes and holding her hands in mine " I know the reason i haven't been getting in touch is becuse the infinate cities tribes need your help if you goc and fight i promise to look after Yvonne you trust me don't you?" she asked her dark eyes staring at me intesnly
" how would i know its true though?" i quesntion " well." she whisbers her head moving closer to mine " because i wouldn't betray my soul mate." she contiued then gently put her lips on mine I loved her too of course i did but being a gardian meant that i had to stay with my child but iwent to the infinate city to sign up and get ready for the fight

Lydia

I sat waitching Yvonne she woukd be asleep for a good 5 more hours i decided to sleep aswell i put a protection feild over yvonne and went to sleep in the chair. dreaming of Neros my hero my love as we were little we met in playschool these boys were picking on me calling me witchie b**** i was surprised to remeber that the bad mouthed of the kids at the age of five Neros came and told them to clear off and gave me a hug because i was crying i insited in was hay fever but Neros didn't belive me. Neros and I have been friends ever since we walked into primary school we sat together with dinky tables walked round the play ground arm in arm whispering things to each other at birthdays our parents wondered if we wanted a disco but we just had little tea parties together but when we started high school our feelings about each other were clear we started dating and got closer then i made it go wrong i went out with a boy called Grant and broke Neros heart we never spoke to each other until we left school and i aplogised and he said it was best to just be friends i was really really really really pleased that we could be friends again then he got a job as a gardian and i got a job as a cashier in the apothcary shopand we didn't see each other for ages until i went to vist him and got to know Yvonne all these visions in my head were all together like a menu of movies i scrolled along them and then one automaticly started him still in this wooden box white bruised he was dead in the dream. I woke with a start and waited for the

Morning sun rays that came into the room i sat up with a awful crick in my neck from sleeping funny i saw Yvonne's eyes slowly open big full blue eyes along with her blonde curls she smiled " hello Lydia." she said she has known me since she was little because i used to vist Neros alot. "wheres Neros?" she asked
" he is in the infinate city he will be back at the end of the week." i told her but i didn't sound sure. " okay so you are my gardian at the moment?"
" yep and i am very very very happy to be with you today Yvonne." i said getting up " what shall i wear today Yvonne?"
" the purple one with the blowing up with streamers teddy!" she exclaimed clapping her hands " why are you shouting Yvonne?" said her mother through the door
" nothing mum Lydias here!" she told her " oh is that Neros girlfriend okay then just quieten down your dad just got to sleep!" "okay mum!" i gave her a big hug and got her dressed because she wasn't too well at the moment but she was specail because she was a angel with amazing powers. "lydia." she whispered
nervously " what is it Yvonne?" i asked almost in panic she must sense something thats coming i hoped with nero in the infinate city all this wouldn't happen.

Nero
It felt odd being here for such a long time i missed Yvonne and most of all Lydia i loved Lydia alot but my duty makes my heart shatter. we are all huddled in old tents four in each. I just wanted this war to be over i put my head in my hands.
and made a promise to lydia that i would get back okay i heard her singing even though we are worlds apart.
Lydia
Oh, Why You Look So Sad?
Tears are in your eyes
Come on and come to me now
Don't be ashamed to cry
Let me see you through
cause I've seen the dark side too
When the night falls on you
You don't know what to do
Nothing you confess
Could make me love you less
Oh Nero where ever you are be careful I love you so much and miss you so badly Yvonne senses danger and i don't know what to do reveal my self and help save earth or watch its destruction i am torn. No i have to protect Yvonne i made a vow i must if i ever have a chance with him, my duty is to my heart so i must keep with my promise I will forever
Nero
we are going into war now the enemeys are surounding us and if we get defeated they will move on to earth and maybe kill my dearest Lydia my secret feelings for her will never be told anger flows through my body i will defeat them if its the last thing i do in the name of love and friendship. " march forward." shouted the head we all marched to where the enemey was i sighed this is it i love you Lydia. it happend so fast some of them jumped us and then it all went black
Lydia
" my heart was breaking as i sat at the hospital bed beside Nero i hoped he would wake soon his scars cut across his face his eyes gently and slowly fliutter open seeing them intesnse brown eyes again was shocking i blinked to see if i wasn't seeing things. " Hello Lydia, I am so sorry." he croaked.
"why are you sorry?" i asked gently my head gently leaning over him " because i promised i would be careful and come back ok."
I couldn't keep back the tears then "Its not your fault Nero my love they jumped you you weren't to know that." he tried to nod then looked up to the ceiling " I need to say something." he whispered to me. "What." " I...II..love you." he said and his eyes slipped away and his breath shortend. I screamed the nurses atended to him. it was no use he was dead/

Nero
Sometimes i look back at the life
i had with no strife
things that could have been
i wish that would have been
i try to reach out my hand
i don't understand
whiteness all around me
with out you i am nothing
oh love means everything to me
Lydia
The funeral was in the santuary of the infanate city. They let Yvonne come too even though she didn't understand death staring at this pale wooden coffen made my throat feel like it was getting throttled i choaked back the tears for Yvonne.
I'll stand by you
I'll stand by you
Won't let nobody hurt you
I'll stand by you
when the music started Yvonne ran out of the church knew where she was going a girl followed her. her new gardian i am noty aloud to look after them because i am a witch they don't treat like them i am diffrent and they act like they hate the sight of me . After the funeral i walked out to the sunset point where me and Nero used to go. " I really do love you Lydia." the wind whispered i turned round a pale grainy image of Nero was behind me " I love you too Nero so much my heart is breaking." "I know." he smiled gently
"maybe." i whispered" maybe we wern't meant to be" tears fell down my cheak and into my lap . "Oh we were." he said and he sat next to me i felt his touch his breath his warmth. I saw him he was full " But i thought."
" Love as strong as ares will never die so love is even stronger than death i am back for you Lydia back to stay while Yvonne has Mellisa my sister to look after her. I resigned as a gardian before i died. so we can start our life together."
" I would like that, very much." I whispered he took me in his arms and i held him close he kissed me i closed my eyes i have only imagined this moment in dreams its even better.
3 years later.
Nero and me have a little girl called Hannah we are so happy together and are gettiing married in march. Looking back I couldn't belive that i was so blind to his love everything he did was in love for me.
Nero
Me and Lydia are so happy together with our little hannah our life is happy and exciting with her growing everyday we are yet to know if she is a witch like Lydia or a infinate city person like me or both that would show them we live in the suburbs of the inafinate city and its only a few minutes walk away from her village. Me and Lydia will be together forever.
I'll stand by you
I'll stand by you
Won't let nobody hurt you
I'll stand by you
Take me in, into your darkest hour
And I'll never desert you
I'll stand by you

and have a great life together a long long long long life together forever with Hannah.